Friday, April 17, 2009

When A Wrong Becomes A Right


Just a quick note to let you know my story, Past or Present, is up at The Erotic Woman. Take a read and let me know what you think. I'm finding it so hard to concentrate on my deadlines when it is so damned nice outside. The birds are calling me, maybe I should go out and say hello.
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8 comments:

Emerald said...

LOVED the premise of that story, Heidi! I'll be honest, non-jealousy like that really turns me on. I found this line really beautiful:

"Coming with Todd, but coming for Jake."

And I found the ending exquisite.

Thanks!

Heidi Champa said...

Thanks, Emerald. Glad you liked it. I really liked this one too, I enjoyed writing it. It was one of those stories that started out as one thing, but turned into something else. I love those!!

Erobintica said...

Loved the story Heidi - I like the non- jealousy thing too. Nice. Thanks.

Heidi Champa said...

Thanks, Erobintica. Glad you liked it.

JM Stone said...

Wow, Heidi, that was just gorgeous. Loved all of it!

This just hit me though...

"It felt like a movie all of a sudden. Like it wasn’t going to be me at all, but some character who would know just how to handle this. "

I love the way that conveys the surreal feelings :D

Beautiful, just beautiful!

~J

Anonymous said...

That story was sooo good. I could actually envision myself as the main character and felt all those emotions. WOW! Thanks for sharing.

Anonymous said...

ps I don't have a google blogger or the patience to set one up (at least yet) so I guess I'm anonymous! :)
Gigi

Heidi Champa said...

Thanks JM and Gigi. I am so glad that the response to my story has been so positive. I really liked this one, and it is always so nice when other people agree.

Gigi, welcome. Don't worry about being anonymous, everyone is welcome here.