Just a quick note to let you know my story, Past or Present, is up at The Erotic Woman. Take a read and let me know what you think. I'm finding it so hard to concentrate on my deadlines when it is so damned nice outside. The birds are calling me, maybe I should go out and say hello.
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8 comments:
LOVED the premise of that story, Heidi! I'll be honest, non-jealousy like that really turns me on. I found this line really beautiful:
"Coming with Todd, but coming for Jake."
And I found the ending exquisite.
Thanks!
Thanks, Emerald. Glad you liked it. I really liked this one too, I enjoyed writing it. It was one of those stories that started out as one thing, but turned into something else. I love those!!
Loved the story Heidi - I like the non- jealousy thing too. Nice. Thanks.
Thanks, Erobintica. Glad you liked it.
Wow, Heidi, that was just gorgeous. Loved all of it!
This just hit me though...
"It felt like a movie all of a sudden. Like it wasn’t going to be me at all, but some character who would know just how to handle this. "
I love the way that conveys the surreal feelings :D
Beautiful, just beautiful!
~J
That story was sooo good. I could actually envision myself as the main character and felt all those emotions. WOW! Thanks for sharing.
ps I don't have a google blogger or the patience to set one up (at least yet) so I guess I'm anonymous! :)
Gigi
Thanks JM and Gigi. I am so glad that the response to my story has been so positive. I really liked this one, and it is always so nice when other people agree.
Gigi, welcome. Don't worry about being anonymous, everyone is welcome here.
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